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Sunday, 17 June 2018
Music slide 2018
I like the way that I knew the song and the strings already .
Next time I could look at the camera more and stop looking around .
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Thursday, 14 June 2018
Sunday, 27 May 2018
Writing Sample - Persuasive Speech
I think I did well at my introduction on my speech.
I did well at saying my speech in front of the class.
Next time I could look at my class and talk clearly.
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Thursday, 24 May 2018
Thursday, 17 May 2018
Week 3 reflection
Tony the forensic officer came to tell us all about what he does . He showed us how to get finger prints and foot print and see them to the christchuch office to see who did it .
| Tony showed us how to get finger prints onto the plastic . |
| Tony showed us how they get foot prints off the floor and send to see how did it . |
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Tuesday, 8 May 2018
crime writing
On the 30th of April 2018 suddenly the phone rang . Detective DJ was called to go to kaiapoi north school Tiwai creative cave at 12 :38 pm sharp .
Soon detective DJ jumpped into action the very first thing she noticed was the note. That said Ha ha payback for annying ME ! ! ! . Who wrote this note thourght detective to herself suspecting other things too . Suddenly she noticed that there was no fish tank because there is aways a fish tank in a class room. she thourght there is normal one .
Her first thought the was the finger prints she wanted to analges the finger prints to see if there's a match . Detective DJ thought she could get some suspects out of the crime but see saw three hand prints . Her hands were drawn to the 1,2,3 foot prints all around the room is well .DJ thought of the some suspects Mr Hendo , Miss Hunter ,Miss Lamond ,Miss Turner ,Miss Bayliss and Miss Harcent .I have to go talk and find out who did it . . .
She has to go see all the suspects to see who did it and why . First Mr Hendo they are all teachers from there school . I found his water bottle and his coin but he said he didn't did it . Then Miss hunter , Miss Lamond , Miss Tuner ,Miss Bayliss and Miss Harcent they all said I didn't do it .
Why would they do it and do they have the fish tank or not ? Who do you think it is ? Mr hendo ,Miss hunter ,Miss Tuner ,Miss Lamond ,Miss Bayliss ,Miss Harcent . Not Mr hendo ,Miss Hunter ,Miss harcent and Miss Tuner its her fish tank . Now its Miss Lamond or Miss Bayliss one or the other . I...I... I think they are working TOGETHER ! ! !
Soon detective DJ jumpped into action the very first thing she noticed was the note. That said Ha ha payback for annying ME ! ! ! . Who wrote this note thourght detective to herself suspecting other things too . Suddenly she noticed that there was no fish tank because there is aways a fish tank in a class room. she thourght there is normal one .
Her first thought the was the finger prints she wanted to analges the finger prints to see if there's a match . Detective DJ thought she could get some suspects out of the crime but see saw three hand prints . Her hands were drawn to the 1,2,3 foot prints all around the room is well .DJ thought of the some suspects Mr Hendo , Miss Hunter ,Miss Lamond ,Miss Turner ,Miss Bayliss and Miss Harcent .I have to go talk and find out who did it . . .
She has to go see all the suspects to see who did it and why . First Mr Hendo they are all teachers from there school . I found his water bottle and his coin but he said he didn't did it . Then Miss hunter , Miss Lamond , Miss Tuner ,Miss Bayliss and Miss Harcent they all said I didn't do it .
Why would they do it and do they have the fish tank or not ? Who do you think it is ? Mr hendo ,Miss hunter ,Miss Tuner ,Miss Lamond ,Miss Bayliss ,Miss Harcent . Not Mr hendo ,Miss Hunter ,Miss harcent and Miss Tuner its her fish tank . Now its Miss Lamond or Miss Bayliss one or the other . I...I... I think they are working TOGETHER ! ! !
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Thursday, 3 May 2018
Week 1 Reflection
This week I got back from the school holidays and we saw a crime scene in or creative cave . When we were investigating , we found that Miss T's fish tank was missing with glass and stones around were in should have been . There were 17 clues leading to the robber but the import ones were the hat , foot prints , hand prints , note and the cup with the lipstick and sticky notes . I think the culprit is Miss lamond and Miss bayliss working together because of the note the lipstick cup and the sticky notes .
We have groups to see what teacher or teachers who did it my group is Me , Rachel , Billie-Jo and Raydin . We have to see if Andrea did it or not she said see feeds fish to her cat . I did the finger prints this week in was very interesting I loved doing it , it was really cool .
Next week I could not pop my finger print .
I like that I finished everthink .
We have groups to see what teacher or teachers who did it my group is Me , Rachel , Billie-Jo and Raydin . We have to see if Andrea did it or not she said see feeds fish to her cat . I did the finger prints this week in was very interesting I loved doing it , it was really cool .
Next week I could not pop my finger print .
I like that I finished everthink .
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