Eportfolio Science

Camp Writing

Motivation:

Camp Experiences

Learning Objectives:

Level 3

• Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

Level 4

• Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.

Learning goals:

• To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
• A variety of sentence starters
• A variety of sentence lengths
• Edit and rework
• Effective peer checking and feedback

Dear mum and dad,
I'm just writing you a letter from camp ( Waipara Boys brigade) . Today i'm going kayaking ,the flying kiwi ,water slide ( and the flying fox ) and tree climbing .

I just finished all the activities and we'er having cottage pie and and beans/carrots for dinner . We have a confidence course tonight and a quiz . Our name is the bestist six ever for the quiz and were going to the confidence course soon , i'll tell you about it soon ...

The confidence course was amazing I fell over twice and banged into tree branches over and over again . After the confident course we played duck,duck goose, I was the tenth goose and before me was Abbie she tagged me to be the goose and I got her ( hahahahaha ) . She was not happy about it at all . We got to have free time in the dark under the creaky gloomy trees for about ten second then come inside . Its bed time now i'll tell you more stuff tomorrow .

Good morning , I have had a great night but the talking was annoying . We just got breakfast it was good good I had rice bubbles and peaches . I ate the rice bubbles with peaches they were soggy but delicious . We are going to the giant swing and then the raft building activity , I think the girls will win . So about the two activities the girls won the raft building activity and the boys one broke even before they got into the water . I hurt myself on the giant swing because the harness was way to tight on one of my legs .

I have had a great time at camp and spending time with my friends . I can't wait to see you guys
                                                  Love from kadince  xx



       

Our World - Geology

Photography

close up

worm side view

Extreme close up

Bird side vrew

long shot

1-What is your favourite photo and why ? My favourite photo is the bird side view because it is a photo of me and it is a cool photo to take .
2-What image worked the best and why ? The image that worked the best was the close up because we went quickly to the hands and it looked cool.
3-choose a photo and explain why did you chose this subject ? We chose to do the worm side view with Danielle because I had a photo .
4-What is the story behind the images?what feelings/emotions did you create ? The story behind the images are that they are cool ones in the hall.The feelings in the hands were happy and exciting.
5-What would you change ? I would change the basketball long shot and do a long shot of the stage with someone on it to make it cool.

Kadince's week 9 reflection

Week 9 Reflection

What is something you are proud of or have found interesting in your learning recently?

- I like that I have done my writing that I have finished . I also like that I understand the video that we watched .

https://vimeo.com/62773137

What is something you need to work on in your learning and why?

- I need to look at capital letters and full stops in my writing also detail and pigs. I need to use different starting words.

Our Tōtara goal has been Responding Appropriately, what does this mean to you?

- I think this means to me that you use nice words . Respect teachers , friends and family .

How can you show Responding Appropriately?

- I can speak nicely to my friends and respect them. I need to respect my teachers and listen is well .

Kadince camp reflection

WAINUI CAMP, 2018

What is your best memory of Tōtara camp?

- I loved the flying fox it was the best activie Taco our in strak tour gave us a huge weg. We were all lauging and ollie was a huge dramer queen because of all his possing . Then we had to get the fliper into the hollar hop if we didn't we had to do as many press ups Oliver said 20 press ups he didn't get it .

challenged you on camp and how did you get through this challenge?

- The high ropes was my challenge because I didn't want to go any higher because of the hight and felt like I was going to fall . But I knew that my team had me . But they didn't have it on lock I was terrifed . Just because I was wiggling and the rope wasn't tight .

How did you show Active Listening on camp and why was it important?
-I showed active listening by listening to the perents in our group Jamie.R and Mishalle because they were keeping us safe . I listened if they said stop , walk , look , listen and cearful I was listing very well even my friend said so I also lisened by look at the perent and listening if somebody was talking to me I would keep listening to the perents .

Kadince week 2 reflection

Tōtara Weekly Reflection Term:     1          Week: 2

Some work I am proud of… (add evidence and a brief explanation)

I am proud of my ball about me .

What challenged me over last two weeks?

Doing my homework and making new friends .

How did I overcome these challenges or what do I need to do to overcome them in the future?

I asked my Mum and Dad for help and I played with my old friends and their new friends .

What is my personal goal for next week?

To finish my home work faster .

This fortnights Tōtara goal was greetings and I achieved/showed this by...

Saying hello to my Family , Friends and teachers .

Kadine week 2 reflection .

Tōtara Weekly Reflection Term:      1         Week: 2

Some work I am proud of… (add evidence and a brief explanation)

I am proud of my A Ball About Me  because I finished it and it is very cool .

What challenged me over last two weeks?

My home work and get new friends .

How did I overcome these challenges or what do I need to do to overcome them in the future?

I asked my mum and dad to help me with my home work and I started hanging out with my old friends and their new friends .

What is my personal goal for next week?

To finish my home work faster at home and finish some of my work faster .

This fortnights Tōtara goal was greetings and I achieved/showed this by...

Saying hello to the teachers , my family and my friends each day .

All About Me Pic Collage

All About Me

Who is in my family/whanau?

Mum-Jamie , Dad-Chad , Me , Ambah and Aliyah .

What are my favourite things to do in my own time?

I love to draw , colour in , read and Do maths .

What do you like to do at school?

I love to meet my friends and doing maths .

What would I like to improve and make progress with this year?

I would like to read more books .

What helps you learn?

My friends , Teachers and books .

What stops you learning?

All the loud noises and people talking around me .

Who are my friends at school?

Helena , Kiriama , Brooke , Jonty , Ollie , Kaylee , Ally , Zoe , Aaliyah.S , Aaliyah.R and Ambah .

What was the best part of the holidays?

Having my 11th birthday party and spending time with my family at the river .