Motivation:
Camp Experiences
Learning Objectives:
Level 3
- Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
- Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
- Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
- Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.
Level 4
- Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
- Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
- Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
- Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.
Learning goals:
- To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
- A variety of sentence starters
- A variety of sentence lengths
- Edit and rework
- Effective peer checking and feedback
Dear mum and dad,
I'm just writing you a letter from camp ( Waipara Boys brigade) . Today i'm going kayaking ,the flying kiwi ,water slide ( and the flying fox ) and tree climbing .
I just finished all the activities and we'er having cottage pie and and beans/carrots for dinner . We have a confidence course tonight and a quiz . Our name is the bestist six ever for the quiz and were going to the confidence course soon , i'll tell you about it soon ...
The confidence course was amazing I fell over twice and banged into tree branches over and over again . After the confident course we played duck,duck goose, I was the tenth goose and before me was Abbie she tagged me to be the goose and I got her ( hahahahaha ) . She was not happy about it at all . We got to have free time in the dark under the creaky gloomy trees for about ten second then come inside . Its bed time now i'll tell you more stuff tomorrow .
Good morning , I have had a great night but the talking was annoying . We just got breakfast it was good good I had rice bubbles and peaches . I ate the rice bubbles with peaches they were soggy but delicious . We are going to the giant swing and then the raft building activity , I think the girls will win . So about the two activities the girls won the raft building activity and the boys one broke even before they got into the water . I hurt myself on the giant swing because the harness was way to tight on one of my legs .
I have had a great time at camp and spending time with my friends . I can't wait to see you guys
Love from kadince xx
